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We interrupt the daily progression of actual civil war to bring you a message about a fictional civil war story. I’ve finished the manuscript for my book, “The Sniper.” Now I’m looking for beta readers. I’m looking for folks to read the book and give me their honest feedback. Also I’d like to disseminate the book to friends and family who you judge would be a good fit for the book based on your estimation and if they agree to read it I’d like to get their opinions too.
I’m looking to get this book out to the largest group of people possible to see whether it is something that people will want to read. So after reading it if you think it’s appropriate for people you know let me hear that too. And remember, I’m not a fragile author. If you think it sucks, say so, but also tell me why you think it.
If you’re interested leave a comment to that effect and I’ll e-mail you a copy of the story. Now this is just a pdf. No nice cover, no actual paper. Just electrons. But I will guarantee that this sniper is nothing like the actual sniper we’ve had to hear about for the last week.
And just to remind you here’s the beginning of the book.
Chapter 1 – An Object Lesson
Joseph Boghadair was set up at a loophole in a small prefabricated metal building at the top of the mountain that contained the Icarus Mine. His .50 caliber sniper rifle was trained on the narrow road that led up to the mine. He could see a line of black SUVs about a mile and a half down the road and he was getting ready to start firing on the convoy. His first shots took out the engine of the lead vehicle thereby halting the convoy. His second volley took out the engine of the last car in line thus trapping the rest of the vehicles between. Then at a more leisurely pace he took care of the other eight vehicles. By this point the passengers were crouching behind their disabled cars and randomly firing handguns and automatic weapons in Joseph’s general direction with almost no discernible results.
After about half an hour a few of the men in black body armor attempted to reach a stand of trees about 300 yards away to their left. Joseph put a few well aimed rounds in front of their path and they quickly retreated back to the supposed safety of their not-so-mobile-autos. Joseph snorted wryly at their shyness.
An hour after that a helicopter approached the mountain from the opposite direction to Joseph’s loophole. Walking over to a window on the other wall he could see a distant Blackhawk approaching at relatively high altitude. Joseph then began his preparations for their reception.
Between crew and troops, the Blackhawk had a dozen men on board. And more importantly it had a couple of Hellfire missiles. From a very safe distance away it targeted Joseph’s position and fired. The missile struck precisely on target and obliterated the steel structure almost completely. All that remained was the foundation of the structure around the mine shaft, now clogged with debris.
The Blackhawk landed about three quarters of a mile from the mine entrance. At this point the agents, hunkered down behind their vehicles, began to stream toward the helicopter. By the time they reached the aircraft the troops had exited and were waiting for their rescued brethren to arrive.
FBI Special Agent in Charge, George Chastain assembled both teams and briefed them on the updated mission plan. “We will proceed to the mine head and look for any human remains. We will collect whatever we can retrieve for lab analysis and attempt to seal the mine head until qualified personnel can be assembled for recovery operations. It is presumed that the target, Joseph Boghadair was killed by the missile strike but we will take no chances. He was an extremely dangerous individual and should not be approached by anyone without backup and prior approval from leadership. In addition to his war record it is believed that Boghadair is responsible for the shooting deaths of forty-six people in the last six months with thirteen of those people being FBI personnel. No one enters the mine until remote sensing equipment is brought in. Alright, proceed.”
The agents formed two groups. Apparently, SUV agents and helicopter agents must not bond very well. But before they were more than a hundred feet from the helicopter the ground began to quake so powerfully beneath them that they were irresistibly knocked off their feet. And while they were clawing at the ground for dear life, they could see that the high ground where the mine head was located had collapsed into the earth. The roar of that collapse was more frightening than the initial earthquake and some of the agents hid their heads under their arms in abject terror. When the mountain stopped shaking the men started to collect themselves and stand up. When they looked around them, they were astonished. A circular pit had opened up centered on the mine head. It was a thousand yards in diameter and so deep that only blackness could be seen at its center. Several cracks had formed outside the circular pit. One of these had nearly swallowed the Blackhawk. It was on its side and half buried in the crevice. Its rotors were fractured and it wouldn’t be flying away from this landing.
Chastain went over to the edge of the crater and just stared down into the blackness below. Then he went back to his team and started giving orders to begin a retreat from the stricken mountain. He was trying to think of what he was going to tell his boss. Nothing reasonable came to mind.
Wise men say that we resign to civil society our natural right of self-defence only on condition that the ordinances of law should protect us.
Sir Walter Scott
I was talking to an old friend a few days ago and the subject of war came up. Now it wasn’t the Ukraine war or the Iran war but it was all war. And I said I was worried that we might be in a situation where extreme escalation was a possibility. And my rationale was that nuclear states are starting to get involved in larger conflicts like Ukraine and Iran and if these conflicts start to escalate, they very well might produce situations where the cost of losing is deemed too high by leadership and brinksmanship could drag us into the tactical nuclear scenarios. And that could very easily spill over into doomsday situations.
Now, I was clear that I thought that Putin, Trump and Xi were all likely to want to keep a lid on any dangerous escalation but the current situations were very, very unstable and dangerous. And because my mind works by analogies I immediately thought to try and compare this situation to World War I. Well, it’s really nothing like 1914 except that a relatively minor incident might trigger a general conflagration. I might compare our current position to that of the British back then and China to Germany and Russia to Austria, let’s say. And these are just absurdly vague equivalencies but that’s how my gloomy mind works. But despite the vagueness and the obviously different circumstances today, it occurs to me that things are a lot hotter than they’ve been for a very long time and the balance of power is become a lot less friendly to us.
Now, does this mean I’m digging a bomb shelter and prepping for the apocalypse. No, I’m not. But that might have a lot more to do with just how old and tired I am now. Surviving a nuclear holocaust somewhere between New York City and Boston is an absurdity that I don’t even want to consider. But at the same time, it feels like rethinking the cold war realities is more relevant than it’s been since the 1990s.
Of course, the other side of this coin is the fact that none of the nuclear powers wants to be seen as weak. But with drone technology rendering most of the conventional battlefield hardware obsolete it’s very easy for superpowers to get drawn into frustrating and embarrassing regional conflicts that can easily lead to dangerous thinking about the advantages of being a nuclear power. And regional conflicts seem to be growing in size and number.
Well, anyway, I’ve shared my thoughts or maybe I should say fears. It’s been a long time since I worried about nuclear war. And it’s not like anything can be done by the likes of me. But it just adds another layer of stress to a world that’s already chock full of crises. Well, I hope Trump and Vance and Rubio are keeping the lines of communication open to Putin and Xi. Wouldn’t want a miscommunication to turn into the apocalypse.
Blessed be His name, who hath appointed the quiet night to follow the busy day, and the calm sleep to refresh the wearied limbs and to compose the troubled spirit!
Sir Walter Scott
I had a similar situation with my Disability pay when I retired from the Army. Due to a snafu about a separation check when I was RIFed in 1986, I could not get my retirement pay until it was paid back. Basically 2 years’ retirement pay. Meanwhile, I was approved for a 70% VA Disability. I figured that would cover most of the delayed retirement. However, the checks did not show up. When I enquired, I was told that the Disability would be withheld until the separation pay was repaid. After careful examination of the paperwork they sent me, and finding that both checks were being put towards the settlement, the math said that the repayment had been completed six months earlier. When I contacted the VA I got the bureaucratic run around until I demanded to talk to a supervisor. You can’t, the drone said. Why not? I asked. “Its POLICY!”
So, I let them have their policy, and filed a Congressional complaint. Neither Bernie nor Lehey did any good, but amazingly, then-Congressman Welch lit a fire under someone’s ass and six weeks later I got not only my retirement and disability, but $36,000 in Disability backpay!
Keep fighting,
Illegitimi non carborundum!
Bureaucrats are one of the things that make American life purgatorial. But small-town bureaucrats are a special case that is worth discussing because of their emergent characteristics. When I was young and living in New York City, one of the most horrific ordeals that the city could dish out was a trip to the Department of Motor Vehicles. The DMV was located in a large old building and there would be many, many lines of New Yorkers waiting to get their business attended to. Maybe your license was about to expire and you had to pay the fee or get your picture taken or take the eye test or, God forbid, you needed to correct a mistake on the document. You would wait in one of these lines and hope against hope for quick service. Eventually, this hope would cruelly die in that first line. The glacial pace of the line would sooner or later crush your spirit and you took on the same weary, miserable expression of everyone else around you. And even before you reached the front of the line you would have already sized up the essential traits of the clerk waiting on your line. She (it was always a woman) had a face that could stop a clock and her IQ probably hovered around 75 and she worked and talked so slowly that you weren’t sure from moment to moment whether she had lapsed into a coma. But regardless of her demeanor and obvious imbecility the only thing you knew going in was that she would declare your problem didn’t fit her services ands she would redirect you to the back of some other line. And this same process might be repeated several times until finally you might just flee the building rather than risk arrest for assaulting a public servant.
But small towns do not possess this kind of apparatus. Even at tax time they do not possess the vast numbers of citizens needed to turn lines into killing fields. They just don’t. But what the bureaucracy of a small town does possess in spades is kooks. Once again, they’re all women (well not the road department but they’re not really bureaucrats) and they often have faces that could stop clocks but their scope of influence is limited. There just aren’t enough people in town hall to endlessly stall a tax payer from receiving some government service. So instead of delay they’ve developed the art of obfuscation to a high art form. I was talking to the assistant town clerk of Dunwich and wanted to clear up a problem having to do with the misspelling of a road name. And it was complicated. Both names that were listed in various state databases were incorrect but I wanted to determine who had jurisdiction over what the correct name actually was. She sent me to the Assessor’s Office but the Assessor was out of the office for a while and so I got the assistant to the Assessor. I might as well have been speaking to a parrot. She kept taking the information I gave her and mixing it up in her mind and when I tried to correct her, she just talked over me and tried to solve the wrong problem. And of course, she just kept getting more and more confused and excited until she was just rattling her mantra about how these kinds of problems were usually the taxpayer’s fault. Finally, she told me to call the Post Office because they knew what everyone’s address was supposed to be. But when I mentioned that the Post Office was a federal agency and the state should be the ones with the official records, she told me I had to come back when the Assessor was back because I was upsetting her.
And that’s what I did. The Assessor knew all about the incorrect names in the databases and told me that the state had issued a statement pointing to the documents that contained the correct name. It took all of two minutes to answer the question. The assistant was at her desk with her head buried in her paperwork and studiously ignored my interaction with her boss. So, is the small-town bureaucrat worse than her city relative? Absolutely not. There is none of the moronic sadism that is on display in Gotham. And honestly, I’m sure the assistant assessor isn’t abysmally stupid. She’s just a fuzzy headed old lady who isn’t up to any kind of logical thinking when anything is out of the ordinary. But it does make for an ordeal at Dunwich town Hall. Next!!!
Tell that to the marines—the sailors won’t believe it.
Sir Walter Scott
Oh no more writer talk!!!
I watched a YouTube video about fiction writing. The premise of the video was that trying to learn how to write by the commonly accepted method of just writing a bunch of stuff and seeing if it’s any good is a hopeless effort. He distinguishes two versions of learning; the “kind environment” and the “wicked environment.” The kind environment is what we would call normal learning. So, if you wanted to learn carpentry or to play the guitar, you would study objective instructions on learning progressively more and more difficult skills in the field while receiving continuous feedback on your mistakes through a teacher or some objective test of your results.
He compares this to learning to write which he says is one of the worst cases of a wicked environment. Basically, you bang out a book on your own without knowing anything about the objective rules of what is good and bad and so your work has a thousand defects that you can’t even recognize. The only feedback happens after you work on a book for months and years. And trying to find objective criticism is extremely difficult. So it’s very difficult to improve.
As an example of the advice given by writers, he mentions Stephen King’s advice that writers should write a thousand words a day. But King also states explicitly that writing is a talent that cannot be learned but is inherent in an individual. You either have it or you don’t.
Now the video maker is someone who sells a program on how to become a writer. So, his point is that what new authors need is to have constant feedback from an objective judge on whether what they are producing is good or bad. He states that before you write a novel you have to first learn how to write a sentence, then a paragraph, then a scene and then a chapter. I guess that does sort of make sense. But I wonder how much it costs to become an author in his school? Well, I see his point about learning to write. It does seem that most of us haven’t gotten an objective teacher to tell us what’s good and not so good in our writing. Oh well.
But this guy has lots of other information on his YouTube channel and actually I found some things that are helpful. He is a big believer in free book promotions as a way to expand audience and advertise its presence to the larger reading audience. So, there are two promo strategies I’m lining up. The Based Book Sale is having a sci-fi sale in September that I hope to participate in and I also plan to set up a promotion on a site called Freebooksy that has hundreds of thousands of readers looking for a free read. Between these two efforts I hope to be able to distribute around a thousand copies of the book and that should be a large enough sample size to figure out whether the book is popular.
Well currently my book has sold a little more than four hundred copies. I guess that’s not so bad but I do hope to see an increase in sales month over month so I want to give it a boost this fall. Now as far as Stephen King’s statement that writing literature is an innate talent that can’t be learned, I guess I’m of two minds. I’m sure there are people who don’t have an inner ear for good writing and probably won’t ever write anything very entertaining. But I also think that training yourself to put together a good scene or an interesting plot line will greatly improve the quality of your books.