Here’s a sample of a book I’m currently about a quarter of the way through. If you look at the Header of the website there’s a new link to “Stuff to Buy.” That where I’ll embed links to books and photogrpaphy I’ll have to sell soon.
The American Archipelago
Book 1 – The Sniper
Chapter 1 – An Object Lesson
Joseph Boghadair was set up at a loophole in a small prefabricated metal building at the top of a mountain that contained the Icarus Mine. His .50 caliber sniper rifle was trained on the narrow road that led up to the mine. He could see a line of black SUVs about a mile and a half down the road and he was getting ready to start firing on the convoy. His first shots took out the engine of the lead vehicle thereby halting the convoy. His second volley took out the engine of the last car in line thus trapping the rest of the vehicles between. Then at a more leisurely pace he took care of the other eight vehicles. By this point the passengers were crouching behind their disabled cars and randomly firing handguns and assault weapons in Joseph’s general direction with almost no discernible results.
After about half an hour a few of the men in black body armor attempted to reach a stand of trees about 300 yards away to their left. Joseph put a few well aimed rounds in front of their path and they quickly retreated back to the supposed safety of their not so mobile autos. Joseph snorted wryly at their shyness.
An hour after that a helicopter approached the mountain from the opposite direction to Joseph’s loophole. Walking over to a window on the other wall he could see a distant Blackhawk approaching at relatively high altitude. Joseph then began his preparations for their reception.
Between crew and troops, the Blackhawk had a dozen men on board. And more importantly it had a couple of hellfire missiles. From a very safe distance away it targeted Joseph’s position and fired. The missile struck precisely on target and obliterated the steel structure almost completely. All that remained was the foundation of the structure around the mine shaft, now clogged with debris.
The Blackhawk landed about three quarters of a mile from the mine entrance. At this point the agents hunkered down behind their vehicles began to stream toward the helicopter. By the time they reached the aircraft the troops had exited and were waiting for their rescued brethren to arrive.
FBI Special Agent in Charge, George Chastain assembled both teams and briefed them on the updated mission plan. “We will proceed to the mine head and look for any human remains. We will collect whatever we can retrieve for lab analysis and attempt to seal the mine head until qualified personnel can be assembled for recovery operations. It is presumed that the target, Joseph Boghadair was killed by the missile strike but we will take no chances. He was an extremely dangerous individual and should not be approached by anyone without backup and prior approval from leadership. In addition to his war record it is believed that Boghadair is responsible for the shooting deaths of forty-six people in the last six months with thirteen of those people being FBI personnel. No one enters the mine until remote sensing equipment is brought in. Alright, proceed.”
The agents formed two groups. Apparently, SUV agents and helicopter agents must not bond very well. But before they were more than a hundred feet from the helicopter a series of incredibly powerful explosions shook the ground and knocked them off their feet. And while they were holding onto the ground for dear life, they could see that the high ground where the mine head was located collapsed into the earth. The roar of that collapse was more frightening than the initial earthquake and some of the agents hid their heads under their arms in abject terror. When the mountain stopped shaking the men started to collect themselves and stand up. When they looked around them, they were astonished. A circular pit had opened up centered on the mine head. It was a thousand yards in diameter and so deep that only blackness could be seen at its center. Several cracks had formed outside the circular pit. One of these had nearly swallowed the Blackhawk. It was on its side and half buried in the crevice. Its rotors were fractured and it wouldn’t be flying away from this landing.
Chastain went over to the edge of the crater and just stared down into the blackness below. Then he went back to his team and started giving orders to begin a retreat from the stricken mountain. He was trying to think of what he was going to tell his boss. Nothing reasonable came to mind.
I like it.
Thanks Rick. It’s taking forever because of all the other crazy stuff I have going on. But it will be finished this year. Come hell or high water.
Hmmmmm. High powered weapons written realistically, Sleazy FBI agents, Explosives.
I’m in.
If I ever finish the darn thing. And whenever the political situation heats up I get even less done!
It is fiction, but I gather you have not served as either a sniper or in demolitions. Sorry to be a killjoy. The concussion from the necessarily huge amount of explosives to blow a one kilometer crater into the earth would have kilied the FBI personnel and would have registered on seismographs around the world. Meteor Crater in Arizona is only slightly bigger than one kilometer and the object which made it was an iron meteor some 50 meters in diameter going about 30,000 mph and yielding an equivalent of TEN MEGATONS. Imagine what a ten megaton nuke would do… Read more »
Hey War Pig, thanks for the feedback. The plot device for this technology is that the structure underneath the section of the mountain to be collapsed has already been removed to a great extent. The charges will remove the remaining supports under the surface which need not be very large. So it is more in the nature of a controlled collapse such as is used for building demolition. The intent was to impress the people present with the scope of the operation and to seal up the excavations at that location beyond the technology of those attempting to follow. Making… Read more »
Not to be a suck up, but that is the way it came across to me – the explosion was opening up a giant excavation which left a crater. The crack that the helicopter fell into was a side tunnel.
Since it’s science fiction I take refuge behind the shield of poetic license. But someone like War Pig would be extremely helpful on the sniper side of the equation. Accuracy on the distances and forces available to a modern sniper is something I have almost no accurate information about. Also there is a scene in Iraq that cries out for an actual veteran to critique details and tone. But without that background I’ll just have to wing it.
Plenty of action to start–very good. Joseph somehow disappears–how? Answer in Ch 2?
Neil, I decided to start the story on a flash forward. After this scene we go back twenty years to set up Bogey and the other main characters. I read somewhere that readers need to be drawn into the story on the first page. Of course I do have a battle scene right after this but somehow I figured this initial scene provided an impressive taste of things to come.