{"id":36475,"date":"2026-04-04T05:00:38","date_gmt":"2026-04-04T09:00:38","guid":{"rendered":"https:\/\/orionscoldfire.com\/?p=36475"},"modified":"2026-04-03T22:07:43","modified_gmt":"2026-04-04T02:07:43","slug":"an-honest-review","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/orionscoldfire.com\/index.php\/2026\/04\/04\/an-honest-review\/","title":{"rendered":"An Honest Review"},"content":{"rendered":"<p>In the last few days, I\u2019ve been getting a few more reviews on Amazon for the \u201cThe Sniper.\u201d\u00a0 And today I got my first somewhat negative comments.\u00a0 Take a look.<\/p>\n<p><a href=\"https:\/\/www.amazon.com\/gp\/profile\/amzn1.account.AEJCIIIHBMCYI2YNANTAY26C2TSA\"><br \/>\n<\/a><a href=\"https:\/\/www.amazon.com\/gp\/customer-reviews\/R2CFODN9DVP5IR\/ref=cm_cr_dp_d_rvw_ttl?ie=UTF8\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener\"><strong><em>4.0 out of 5 stars\u00a0Uneven political thriller good for a slow day<\/em><\/strong><\/a><\/p>\n<p><strong><em>Reviewed in the United States on April 3, 2026<\/em><\/strong><\/p>\n<p><strong><em>Format: Kindle<\/em><\/strong><\/p>\n<p><strong><em>The Sniper is a good, but uneven political thriller.<br \/>\nIt&#8217;s not particularly deep, but entertaining. I liked the plot. I liked most of the characters.<br \/>\nThe lack of a star was in the author&#8217;s (and maybe the editor&#8217;s) lack of basic writing. While the beginning of the novel is a great premise, the lack of detail is astonishing. It&#8217;s like someone describing a video game, but just the broad strokes. I read for the details.<br \/>\nThe other nitpicky thing is that the basics of prose dialogue is ignored entirely. An exchange between two characters is all one paragraph. And then there&#8217;s the commas (or lack thereof). It&#8217;s the classic of &#8220;Is it Thanksgiving or cannibalism?&#8221;<br \/>\nIt&#8217;s a casual read. If you can read past the details, the general plot is pretty good.<\/em><\/strong><\/p>\n<p>&nbsp;<\/p>\n<p>Very interesting.<\/p>\n<p>The Good:<\/p>\n<ul>\n<li>The Sniper is a good \u2026 political thriller.<\/li>\n<li>\u2026 entertaining. I liked the plot. I liked most of the characters.<\/li>\n<li>\u2026 the beginning of the novel is a great premise<\/li>\n<li>\u2026 the general plot is pretty good<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<p>The Bad:<\/p>\n<ul>\n<li>\u2026 uneven<\/li>\n<li>It&#8217;s not particularly deep<\/li>\n<li>\u2026 the lack of detail is astonishing. It&#8217;s like someone describing a video game, but just the broad strokes. I read for the details.<\/li>\n<li>If you can read past the details<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<p>The Ugly:<\/p>\n<ul>\n<li>The other nitpicky thing is that the basics of prose dialogue is ignored entirely. An exchange between two characters is all one paragraph. And then there&#8217;s the commas (or lack thereof). It&#8217;s the classic of &#8220;Is it Thanksgiving or cannibalism?&#8221;<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<p>Yes, very interesting.\u00a0 First of all, this is honest criticism.\u00a0 This fellow doesn\u2019t know me from Adam and he doesn\u2019t owe me anything.\u00a0 That\u2019s valuable to someone who wants to know whether his writing is any good.\u00a0 So, look at the things he likes; \u201centertaining. I liked the plot. I liked most of the characters.\u201d\u00a0 Those are the most important basics of a story.\u00a0 That\u2019s pretty good.<\/p>\n<p>Look at the criticism; \u201cuneven, not particularly deep, lack of details are astonishing.\u201d\u00a0 He wants more!\u00a0 Okay, that\u2019s a problem.\u00a0 This reader probably wants lots more technical description.\u00a0 So, in terms of the mining equipment and the technology for collapsing the earth under a city he wants the details.\u00a0 Fair enough.\u00a0 Well, there will be sequels and we can get that stuff fleshed out to satisfy the technical type.\u00a0 But since this book was about Bogey and he wasn\u2019t a technical guy, I left that stuff aside.\u00a0 When Connors and Cutter get their stories, I\u2019ll geek out on the details.\u00a0 So that\u2019s okay.<\/p>\n<p>Now for the ugly, I\u2019m guessing that the reviewer was an author or an editor himself.\u00a0 I decided not to use a professional proofreader\/editor for the book.\u00a0 I felt comfortable with the level of standard English I could provide.\u00a0 The reviewer is obviously very sensitive to the conventions of professional editing.\u00a0 And that\u2019s legitimate but I\u2019m guessing a lot of my readers won\u2019t be as sensitive to that level of editorial finish.<\/p>\n<p>So, I\u2019m pretty happy with that review.\u00a0 I got an honest review and four out of five stars is pretty damn good news.\u00a0 So, I\u2019m hoping to get a bunch more reviews and who knows I might even get an honest 3 stars from someone.\u00a0 I can take it.<\/p>\n<p><a href=\"https:\/\/orionscoldfire.com\/wp-content\/uploads\/2025\/12\/be-briefs-692ca68a810e0-scope.jpg\"><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" class=\"alignnone size-full wp-image-35361\" src=\"https:\/\/orionscoldfire.com\/wp-content\/uploads\/2025\/12\/be-briefs-692ca68a810e0-scope.jpg\" alt=\"\" width=\"1736\" height=\"1450\" srcset=\"https:\/\/orionscoldfire.com\/wp-content\/uploads\/2025\/12\/be-briefs-692ca68a810e0-scope.jpg 1736w, https:\/\/orionscoldfire.com\/wp-content\/uploads\/2025\/12\/be-briefs-692ca68a810e0-scope-300x251.jpg 300w, https:\/\/orionscoldfire.com\/wp-content\/uploads\/2025\/12\/be-briefs-692ca68a810e0-scope-1024x855.jpg 1024w, https:\/\/orionscoldfire.com\/wp-content\/uploads\/2025\/12\/be-briefs-692ca68a810e0-scope-768x641.jpg 768w, https:\/\/orionscoldfire.com\/wp-content\/uploads\/2025\/12\/be-briefs-692ca68a810e0-scope-1536x1283.jpg 1536w\" sizes=\"auto, (max-width: 1736px) 100vw, 1736px\" \/><\/a><\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>In the last few days, I\u2019ve been getting a few more reviews on Amazon for the \u201cThe Sniper.\u201d\u00a0 And today I got my first somewhat<\/p>\n","protected":false},"author":1,"featured_media":0,"comment_status":"open","ping_status":"open","sticky":false,"template":"","format":"standard","meta":{"_mi_skip_tracking":false,"_exactmetrics_sitenote_active":false,"_exactmetrics_sitenote_note":"","_exactmetrics_sitenote_category":0,"footnotes":""},"categories":[1289,1263,4],"tags":[5147,4484],"class_list":["post-36475","post","type-post","status-publish","format-standard","hentry","category-fiction-by-me","category-stuff-that-personally-interests-me-miscellaneous","category-sff","tag-book-marketing","tag-the-american-archipelago-book-1-the-sniper"],"yoast_head":"<!-- This site is optimized with the Yoast SEO plugin v20.4 - 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